When I altered this quote, I increased the leading in it so that it would not be as cramped, and therefore would be easier to read.
I also changed the green to a cross between dark green and olive green. This combination of colors symbolizes ambition, greed, jealousy, and peace; it therefore symbolizes life in its every form.
I lightened the yellow a little as well because warm colors jump forward in a design, and the yellow had been hard to read.
I made the blue a bit bluer, therefore symbolizing stability a little more
The pink is also a little pinker, and it symbolizes love.
I really like the revised version, it is much easier to read. Great job!
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